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"White Coat Plague"

by SEVER

Doctor's Make me sick
preying on victims
like slumdog landlords
with unruly tenants

they try to Evict em
Throw em out in the Street

Pay this or Else
you'll sleep outside in the street
Your children
will have no bed and no heat

Strong arming them
with mob esque techniques

The Power of the People
Starts at your Feet

From Head to Toe
we are all revolutionary machines

To kill the invisible
it must first be seen !



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Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
by jean on Sunday, November 21, 2010 (22:41:52)
very outspoken poem liked it

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    Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
    by SEVER on Monday, November 22, 2010 (03:16:34)
    jean thanks so much I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
by gottawrite on Monday, November 22, 2010 (21:54:04)
Oh...love the last line especially. Well done.

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    Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
    by SEVER on Monday, November 22, 2010 (23:11:12)
    gottawrite thanks so much I was especially proud of that line as well Very Happy thanks for reading and commenting glad you liked it

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Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Tuesday, November 23, 2010 (18:14:55)
I agree with the underlining frustration and skepticism...they want us to believe them and not ask questions..when we do ask...we are called conspiracy theorists...this is the kind of poetry that leads to awakenings..qaj

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    Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
    by SEVER on Tuesday, November 23, 2010 (18:28:01)
    qaj I was sooo pleased to of gotten your reply to my poem such refreshing commentary I enjoyed reading your comment and I agree it so glad to have someone nail something so perfectly you wrote and you did that thanks again for reading and commenting again and thank you for you nice words. So often nowadays doctors try to break a person to make them submit to what they are saying as being fact if you give a doctor a hard time they make you strip down and put on a gown and I am sick of it and we won't take it laying down. qaj I really liked the last part of your comment ( this is the kind of poetry that leads to awakenings. qaj) this part put the biggest smile on my face thank you my friend. have a good one

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Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
by micsir on Wednesday, November 24, 2010 (13:36:54)
strong message even if i believe in different strokes for different folks. i for one am with you on this. let me die in peace doc and fuck insurance companies, i like taking risks.

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    Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
    by SEVER on Wednesday, November 24, 2010 (21:27:55)
    Well thank you so much micsir for commenting and Im glad we see eye to eye on this one and Im really glad you saw where I was goin where I was goin with this one.

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Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
by starstruck13 on Sunday, June 10, 2012 (00:57:51)
a great poem i loved it

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    Re: "White Coat Plague" (Score: 1 )
    by SEVER on Sunday, June 10, 2012 (01:28:24)
    thanks Im glad you dug it.


    SEVER

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