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Poems - Hear my prayers
| | Hear my prayersby Blue
The complexity of Life...
Always throwing you unexpected turns,
reasons to cast doubt on,
contemplating probabilities and possibilities,
where we can sometimes foresee what lies ahead
when reality starts to sink in
but inside our hearts
we yearn for something
something completely contrary
of the path that we have chosen for ourselves.
Frozen in limbo
Tired from speculations
Lost in translation
Feelings of uncertainty...
Unlock these heavy shackles
and release my inner strengths
to find the answers that I seek.
May you give me what I ask?
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by shazza on Thursday, December 02, 2010 (23:00:53) |
Oh my goodness
this is exactly where I am at right now
KEEP ME STRONG
KEEP ME SANE
Thank you for this
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Blue on Friday, December 03, 2010 (07:04:57) |
You are so welcome! May Poetry Help us through this...xoxo
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by maryanns on Friday, December 03, 2010 (15:10:47) |
I feel you... a fellow traveler of life.
Beautiful poem, I truly enjoyed reading it.
My very best wishes, Mary Ann
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Blue on Friday, December 03, 2010 (15:18:15) |
Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read it... I love it when I get a thought in my head and just let my words flow to express my inner feelings. HUgs! xoxo Blue
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Daniel on Saturday, December 04, 2010 (01:45:34) |
Beautiful Poem
that show how much
you want to find
answers that you are
seeking for.
A Poem that we
all will relate.
Great Poem,
Blue.
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Blue on Saturday, December 04, 2010 (11:52:01) |
Answers, decisions to make, much needed change to find complete and utterly happiness! Glad u liked it... xoxo
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by JoAn on Wednesday, December 08, 2010 (19:33:07) |
Hi Blue, a piece. I like it. Well written.
I just posted this piece, myself....I thought of it when I read yours.
WITHIN A WOMAN'S SOUL
by JoAn
The cry you make for inner strength
is there within you grasp.
The peace you seek will come at length
He answers when you ask.
Stand fast, head high, regain your own control.
Cast no doubts upon yourself
For great strength is within each woman's soul.
Shackles break...gone uncertainty.
Believe you have that inner strength...
and a peacefullness will set you free.
I hope it helps. JoAn
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Blue on Thursday, December 09, 2010 (10:27:21) |
This is Beautiful...Thank You!
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by questionajourney on Tuesday, December 14, 2010 (16:46:33) |
It may not be true after all...that we hold all of our answers already..great thinker piece..qaj
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Blue on Tuesday, December 14, 2010 (17:37:23) |
Thanks Qaj.... I wrote this piece in a moment when my mind was at all its works... thanks for taking the time for commenting ... xoxo Blue
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Dreaming-Demon on Tuesday, December 14, 2010 (16:52:13) |
amazing write my friend, well done
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Blue on Tuesday, December 14, 2010 (17:42:14) |
Thank you sweetie... is nice to see u around .. xoxo Blue
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Leggolas on Tuesday, December 14, 2010 (18:06:12) |
The path of life is that which we cultivate before us. Only the strength of belief, belief in that which you desire, can break those shackles and set you free. Simply beautiful Blue. Fond Regards. Mark.
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Blue on Wednesday, December 15, 2010 (02:25:22) |
Thanks my dear friend,
I believe that day will come one of these days
and I will forever get rid of these shackles!
xoxo Big HUgs xoxo
Michelle
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by locutus243 on Monday, March 28, 2011 (16:37:36) |
I feel as though you have these wonderful ideas flowing through you. Looking at being stuck in 'limbo' in life and trying to battle its complexities is superb, but I really want you to go on and develop the ideas further. You set the scene but then shift...I want you to unlock the thoughts a little more.
Still a good read though and like I said, love the subject matter.
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Re: Hear my prayers
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by Blue on Tuesday, March 29, 2011 (18:59:11) |
I really appreciate the insight and constructive ideas you have pointed out. I will definitely take this to consideration and see what I can come up with. Thank You Locutus! Big Hugs xoxo Blue
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