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Poems - Primitive Mistress - With Drawing

Primitive Mistress - With Drawing

by PinkNeonFlavor

Her serpent eyes bleed,
in the fiery of Egyptian hands.
They bleed so selflessly,
around a sequence of silence.
Golden skies jeer at death,
not a single realm of sound
is driven by her impunity.

Letters, numbers, are strung
in the emotions around her.
Her charisma vein tries to gather
virtuoso spirits in the dark.
She smiles at the frown of light,
because an oily phantom
lingers in a far away distance.

Friends of a lingual construction,
chime in a strange glow.
She drinks the hapless energy
from an inner, primitive mistress.

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by Daniel on Monday, January 10, 2011 (23:00:33)

Very Dark
and Creative.
Especially the Art
you draw. Your words
paint a picture of sadness
and darkness, until you brought
happiness and light. Really enjoyed
reading your Poem,
Sammy.

Smile

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Monday, January 10, 2011 (23:05:45)

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, January 11, 2011 (01:25:18)

I didn't know you were such a great artist. The poem and pic complement each other well.

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Tuesday, January 11, 2011 (09:08:08)

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Tuesday, January 11, 2011 (06:17:32)

Well combined my little pinkidee. Loved it. dAVE

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Tuesday, January 11, 2011 (09:08:41)

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by MichaelFirewalker on Tuesday, January 11, 2011 (13:53:03)

and in the silence of the void...her colors dance...colliding with times to come...songs drawn in blood charge the dark...sung in raptured agony...she moves on orgasmic laughter...pierced by stars..................................michael

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by Craigd741 on Tuesday, January 11, 2011 (17:48:54)

There's something quite unique and fresh about the portrait and the poem is a perfect match. I particularly love the last two lines. Fantastic write. Smile

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Wednesday, January 12, 2011 (02:07:29)

Just wonderful Sammi...I can only draw stick figures and even they are terrible...haha.
Cheers...Harry

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Re: Primitive Mistress - With Drawing (Score: 1 )
by colinb on Saturday, March 23, 2013 (16:38:29)

Love the art work beautifull o & the poem

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