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Poems - The song

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The song

by Upāsaka

Spring creeps slowly now
Patiently awaiting warmth
The birds sing for her




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Re: Placeholder (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Friday, January 14, 2011 (17:11:53)
ooooooooooooops , thank whatever u left out one letter.... Twisted Evil

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    Re: Placeholder (Score: 1 )
    by anna9 on Friday, January 14, 2011 (17:12:31)
    ummm, hope the joke does not annoy you

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      Re: Placeholder (Score: 1 )
      by Upāsaka on Saturday, January 15, 2011 (10:04:11)
      LOL. I don't get why deleting poems is not permitted. Placeholder - because I pulled the rigger too soon then panicked and sent the Poem twice! - in retrospect should have just modified it. LOL. Hope you like "The song".

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        Re: Placeholder (Score: 1 )
        by anna9 on Wednesday, January 19, 2011 (09:23:06)
        ahaaaaaaaaa, double trouble , haha ,
        come on spring

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Re: Placeholder (Score: 1 )
by marek on Friday, January 14, 2011 (17:14:57)
I really liked this poem, it seems simple at first reading but having read it several times in quick sucession its deeper meaning begins to reveal itself. cheers m

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    Re: Placeholder (Score: 1 )
    by Upāsaka on Saturday, January 15, 2011 (10:04:24)
    Embarassed

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Re: The song (Score: 1 )
by severts on Wednesday, January 19, 2011 (23:11:51)
I enjoy how you mix visual and auditory images!

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