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Will you be my muse?

by marich7

Thoughts now alive,
Her words take root,
Growing in her mind,
Writer’s block on mute.

Brain caught on fire,
In a gasoline rain,
Bleeding from her pen,
Is heartache and pain.

Murder’s all she writes,
Paper burdened with truth,
Of lonely cold dark nights,
How we seldom win but lose.

Trail of tears she leaves,
As a part of her dies,
Deceit tortures her memories,
Cause the past never lies.

Then her body hurts,
Her mind falls apart,
Love is like a dagger,
Being pierced through the heart.

The soul bleeds out,
All emotions scatter,
And she can’t figure out,
What the fuck’s the matter.

Then her pen falls to paper,
An explosion barely defused,
Just wish I could be there,
To hug you my muse.




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Re: Will you be my muse? (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Wednesday, February 02, 2011 (21:04:23)
Darkness made palpable, extreme, and somehow seductive. I love the wordplay in this intense piece.

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    Re: Will you be my muse? (Score: 1 )
    by marich7 on Wednesday, February 02, 2011 (21:17:27)
    Thanks pinkneonflavor, glad you liked it.

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Re: Will you be my muse? (Score: 1 )
by Veils_Mistress on Wednesday, February 02, 2011 (22:04:15)
wow, yes you may Smile

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    Re: Will you be my muse? (Score: 1 )
    by marich7 on Wednesday, February 02, 2011 (22:10:08)
    Smile glad you like it, Veils_Mistress. thanks for stopping by.

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Re: Will you be my muse? (Score: 1 )
by twisted_fetish on Friday, February 04, 2011 (04:44:21)
Your muse sounds like quite the poet...i love your sense of rhyme...

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    Re: Will you be my muse? (Score: 1 )
    by marich7 on Friday, February 04, 2011 (04:55:31)
    she is actually. she's an extraordinary individual. we met online, shared poems with each other and her work inspired me a lot.

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