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Poems - Awakening

Awakening

by misty678

I am viewing the world
Through different eyes,
As if I am experiencing it
For the very first time.

Each day is an anticipation
Of what is to come,
As I see the last glistening frost
In the bright winter's sun.

That early morning glow
Gently warms my face,
As I noticed a beautiful flower
Put its first bloom in place.

Gone are the unhappy browns
Replaced by happy green hues,
Under a radiant sky so alive
With various shades of blue.

Bird lifting songs float
Musically through the air,
As I wonder what the lyrics
Might be to the songs I hear.

The morning smells fresh
Like a shower is nigh,
But when I glance up
There's not a cloud in the sky.

The world is awakening
From a long winter's nap,
Is it the coming of Spring
That I am feeling perhaps?

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Re: Awakening (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Tuesday, February 15, 2011 (12:08:19)

Ah, exactly what I needed this morning to lift my awakening spirits up. Come brightly, spring... and quickly for we all await your bloom. Thank you Helen-Lee - for such a lovely poem. Smiles, Mary Ann

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Re: Awakening (Score: 1 )
by misty678 on Tuesday, February 15, 2011 (12:25:14)

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Re: Awakening (Score: 1 )
by ken2shoes on Wednesday, March 02, 2011 (21:16:24)

nice poem about the coming of Spring - I can almost feel it!!

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Re: Awakening (Score: 1 )
by misty678 on Wednesday, March 02, 2011 (21:20:47)

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Re: Awakening (Score: 1 )
by Tamara on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (13:01:30)

Great job!

You've stated, with such clarity and imagery, what so many of us feel after a long, cold Winter.

Don't stop writing!

Best,

Tamara

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Re: Awakening (Score: 1 )
by misty678 on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (13:20:48)

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