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your my world

by jonbon

I dont know if you notice me
But you make up my world
Your eyes are the stars in the sky
That sparkle so bright
Your hair is like a waterfall
That flows so perfectly straight
Your voice is the soft whistle of the wind
That stays in my head
And your smile is a half moon
On a clear cloudless night
This world is amasing
And then again so are you
So you dont really know me
But you you make up my entire world





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Re: your my world (Score: 1 )
by floatingpoet on Tuesday, February 15, 2011 (17:35:29)
hey bud welcome to GP. just checkin out your first post. I live it. you should read my "up in the V-berth" it's my first love poem. it got some great rating though. well' keep writing and we'll check you out from time to time. I gave it a 8! Capt. Mike

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Re: your my world (Score: 1 )
by grayfox on Thursday, February 17, 2011 (08:24:51)
Well done John (Michel here) nice poem. Take Captain Mike's advice, keep writing. I'll be here if you need anything Wink

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