GotPoetry.com > > Poems - Different treatment
GotPoetry.com

Help
Toggle Content .:: Home :: Poems :: Workshop Forums :: Register :: Features ::.
Toggle Content User Info
Welcome Anonymous

Nickname
Password
(Register)

Toggle Content Yesterday's Top
Rank   Name
 01: odinroark
 02: schlegel
 03: KyleJCo
 04: starwatcher
 05: Rabbitt
 06: notapoet
 07: shaaz
 08: Danny-R
 09: ossy
 10: dav.smith
 11: life2all
 12: tint
 13: Michaelw1two

More ...

Toggle Content Donations
Donate with PayPal!
GotPoetry is a community supported site.
Due Date: May 31
May Goal: 180.00
Gross Amount: 0.00
PayPal Fees: 0.00
Net Balance: 0.00
Below Goal: 180.00
Site Currency: USD
 0%

Poems - Different treatment

Poems

Here Web

[ Main | Add Poem | New | Rate | Rankings | Page Slam ]

Different treatment

by jadia4708au

She banged the phone and blasted
I feared more blasts and waited
She was damn angry and out of control
I even forgot to address her and call

I gained little strength and again called
Her previous encounter was stone walled
I was not in rage but in shame
I did not know now what she will blame

“What you think you can talk on phone”
I was taken a back when she had blasted and gone
I became really nervous and tried to console
She was in damn bad mood and on other pole

I thought of bad day ahead and tried to pacify
No amount of persuasion may calm her or satisfy
“Don’t you know how to address woman on women’s day’?
She was trying to be little aggressive and has sway

I thought she wanted little different treatment
She did not want same feeling with the sweet comments
She thought of forcing her views in hostile mood
I thought I may have to miss my precious food

Whole world is complementing us for our role
You are not able to make even small sweet call
What are you going to do for me and my cause?
Now I came to know what were all drama and all because

I laughed it out but after long stress
She had all happiness on face
Even though it was unusual for her to act
She was in hostile mood to impress upon and react

I said congrats on their women’s day
But requested her to find for me a comfortable way
So I can remain in peace with her in this lovely world
But asked her to calm down and return to my warm fold





rating
<< prev | Classic and General Poetry | next >>
Tags:

"Different treatment" | Login/Create an Account | 2
Threshold
The comments are owned by the poster. We aren't responsible for their content.

Re: Different treatment (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Monday, March 07, 2011 (09:32:39)
your poem is fine.the rhymes are ok

| Parent

Re: Different treatment (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Monday, March 07, 2011 (20:05:20)
i am moved by your comment. welcome

| Parent


[ jadia4708au's profile | Commenting Members (2) | | ]

  Added on: 07-Mar-2011 | Hits: 348 | Full author copyright - Exclusive Right held by author.



GotPoetry - News for poets. Place to write.

GotPoetry is the most popular network of performance poets and poetry readings on the internet today.

Editors: John, Mamta and a cast of tens of others.
Publisher: John Powers

Content © 1998-2008
GotPoetry LLC. All rights reserved

Engine released under GNU GPL, Code Credits, Privacy Policy, Legal Notices

Search:
 
GotPoetry.com Web

Forums Search
Gallery Search
Advanced Search


Link to Full Archives
Link to all News Topics


Link for all submission options for this site.

Subscribe - Use an RSS reader to stay up to date with the latest news and posts from GotPoetry.

GotPoetry News RSS Feed

Subscribe with Yahoo!
Subscribe with Google

Other GotPoetry RSS Syndication -  You can syndicate other parts of our site using the following files:

Yesterday's Top News
Yesterday's Top Poems
Forums
New Photos
Blogs
Downloads
Featured Articles