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Poems - Uprising: A Journey - 2 (Ahmed, Fadwa, and Billy the Kid)
| | Uprising: A Journey - 2 (Ahmed, Fadwa, and Billy the Kid)by Ramonez
All it took was for Ahmed
who had been sleeping in his hut
(built at least twenty meters away from the rest of the village),
to stop snoring
to realize that something was out of the ordinary.
Silence crawled over the land,
bringing with it the sensation
of a severed hand in desperate need to attach itself
(any arm would do),
scraping over the sand, against the walls of mud dwellings.
Fadwa touched her wrist, looked up
through a hole in the roof covering;
synthetic satellite blinks took over a clear pre-dawn sky—
the stars cowered,
some even fell away at the sight of their man-made twitters.
Tweets and twitters in the sky
“… news had said they’d blocked the Net,
that a kind-hearted group in the Netherlands had opened their servers
for those folk
either in need to contact loved ones or to tell the bloody truth that stains this sand.”
Or something like that; Fadwa yawned—
she wasn’t sure what the Net was
but it sounded like “serious business”— that’s what he had said,
Uncle Mohammed,
who came for dinner the night before; there’d been terror in his voice.
A stifled yelp broke the stillness.
Within seconds the dunes were lit,
strewn with military-style boots, the rubber soles of which reeked
of corruption
carried in from army bases located not far from where the city sucks souls.
Ahmed was on his hands and knees
Fadwa was peeking through the key hole,
or what was left of the door; Billy the Kid, Fadwa’s goat
had been at it.
Two troops held handguns to his head but Ahmed had already departed.
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Re: Uprising: A Journey - 2 (Ahmed, Fadwa, and Billy the Kid)
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by badmalthus on Saturday, March 19, 2011 (02:29:15) |
An interesting take Ramon...throwing in Billy takes it sideways.
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Uprising: A Journey - 2 (Ahmed, Fadwa, and Billy the Kid)
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by Ramonez on Tuesday, March 22, 2011 (08:33:53) |
Cheers, mate. So much Western culture creeping in everywhere; I thought it fitting at the time.
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