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God hates adultery

by randy-johnson

God hates adultery because it's a bad sin.
You'd better straighten up and not do it again.
You have a beautiful family waiting for you at home.
God will punish you because you decided to roam.
Where I come from, committing adultery is one of the worst things that people can do.
What you're doing to your poor family is terrible and that's certainly true.
You're actually proud of yourself, you act like you're ten feet tall.
If your family learns what you're doing, you may lose them all.
You'd bette save your marriage while you still can.
You'd better start being faithful and a family man.





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Re: God hates adultery (Score: 1 )
by swt_mora on Friday, March 11, 2011 (01:09:22)
Very good message! Flowed well and was just really what some people need to hear. Enjoyed the read.

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Re: God hates adultery (Score: 1 )
by floatingpoet on Friday, March 11, 2011 (15:05:21)
great message your old Capt. Mike here wouldn't even think about it but did you know that god also hates haters! peace and love from Capt. Mike!

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Re: God hates adultery (Score: 1 )
by induce on Friday, March 11, 2011 (23:28:38)
Randy,you have voiced your beliefs well. I can't stand to see people cheat on others.

induce

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Re: God hates adultery (Score: 1 )
by dav.smith on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (02:56:56)
Well said Randy, Not done at all is the best remedy. Well done my friend. dAVE

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Re: God hates adultery (Score: 1 )
by electrictiger on Sunday, April 03, 2011 (16:38:13)
"You'd better start being faithful and a family man."

Or??

A big fireball comes down old testament style?

I don't disagree with you, that adultery is terrible, but the
childlike and pedantic take on it really doesn't do anything
to further your cause, and you seem to draw a lot of conclusions
about 'the cheaters' and what they feel about their own act or even why they may have done it which are too broad to be accurate. How do you know how they feel about it? Do they all feel the same way, and did they all do it for the same reason? The wrath of an absent god is much less interesting than the motivations that drive people.

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