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Earthquake Prepared

by butterflyzrfree

Earthquake prepared
can't find youngest brother
strong nation but
I don't know where he is.
Remember when he blew the flowers
at my face for beautiful good luck
he was to take the monorail
that went near sea.

Oh, what a view!
a country indestructable
nation kind and beautiful
where is my gentle brother?
earthquake prepared.





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Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (03:19:02)
so many people lost, and colonel gaddafi took advantage of the media switching it's attention to japan to slaughter loads of civilians....tough times gaily - pauly and spinner hound.

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    Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (17:17:57)
    Paul, thank you for commenting...

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Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
by Ilan on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (06:12:51)
Heartbreaking part II


Tough poem

Best wishes to all sufferers

Ilan

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    Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (17:18:41)
    Thank you, Ilan! I appreciate it!

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Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (10:43:35)
wow! gave me chills it is so well written and expressed such sadness and love. beautiful!

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    Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (17:19:41)
    Thank you, Zbird! I greatly appreciate your comment!

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Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
by Tamara on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (13:51:52)
Your words make one confront the extreme difficulties, on a quantum scale, endured by the countless number of people involved.

Remember when he blew the flowers
at my face for beautiful good luck


I loved the way you presented such an emotional poem.

Keep writing!

Best,

Tamara

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    Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, March 12, 2011 (17:21:21)
    Thank you for commenting in a detailed critique. I greatly appreciate this. You are a wonderful poet, and all of your comments are appreciated. Gail

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Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
by kylebank on Tuesday, March 15, 2011 (01:17:50)
this is a stunning poem, so rich and potent.

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    Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Tuesday, March 15, 2011 (08:00:03)
    Kyle, thank you. So far I wrote three about Japan, three or four, I can't remember, I am crazy, and haven't even gotton to the reactors. I am in a frenzy. I you want to check out the others, feel free.

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      Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
      by kylebank on Tuesday, March 15, 2011 (09:38:28)
      I will indeed. Its clear this has affected you, its good you are writing about it! I wrote one yesterday: Senbazuru. Check it out if you can, and keep writing about this - you've got some good stuff!

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        Re: Earthquake Prepared (Score: 1 )
        by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, March 17, 2011 (08:49:02)
        Thanks, and I will!

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