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Class

by butterflyzrfree

butterfies absorb negativity
which apparently today I exude
A fruit fly lands on my shoulder,
or is it a hair
roots of trees extrude from ground
difficult test today for Chinese class!


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Re: Class (Score: 1 )
by Upāsaka on Tuesday, May 03, 2011 (21:21:04)
I find it easier to take tests when not sitting on extruding roots.

Are you studying Chinese?

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    Re: Class (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (00:03:35)
    Haha, Upasaka! But can you translate that from the chinese!

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Re: Class (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (07:57:17)
class always shows through, pretty butterfly.....like the sun breaking through the clouds - pauly.

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    Re: Class (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (00:05:42)
    You didn't get it!

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      Re: Class (Score: 1 )
      by omegapaf on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (05:47:43)
      roots?

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Re: Class (Score: 1 )
by induce on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (11:56:30)
Gail, such an odd poem, thank you for the alter~thought. I believe meanings ... hidden suffice. (JMHO)

andYe

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Re: Class (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Wednesday, May 04, 2011 (13:36:21)
So, today you are no butterfly? I like this work. For me I might move the words shoulder and hair, but that is just me. Thought I would share that for what it is worth. Now I think I have misinterpreted what you mean. Forget what I said. Cheers

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    Re: Class (Score: 1 )
    by butterflyzrfree on Thursday, May 05, 2011 (00:08:04)
    It is the complexity of the English words. Look for two that are very close together...

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