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Poems - Blown-up sex doll

Blown-up sex doll

by ericdn

Blown-up sex doll

She would gladly turn a catfight into a brawl,
This drunken bitch looking like a blown-up sex doll.
With cleavage up to her chin and claws that could maul,
I try to make her hate me so she’ll never call.
What must she insist on keeping her mouth agape?
It’s somehow eerily the perfect size and shape.
She heaves her bosoms out for us to have a gape;
Each sad nipple reminds me of a rotting grape.
Look – as slumped as she’s soused, and she’s having a ball!
A receptacle of human waste, and that’s all.
She couldn’t care less what’s showing after the fall:
Her old panties look like something a boat would trawl.

Oh, God, save me from this wretched slut, from this whore!
She’s been slurring her words and it’s starting to bore.
If I could, I’d gladly kick her straight through the door,
But I know she’d only crawl back, begging for more.
Her stringy flesh is all mottled like rancid meat;
Nastier is the odor coming from each teat.
I can’t look as she plops down on her assless seat,
And she’s spraying more than a feral cat in heat.
Does she honestly think that she’s going to score?
Tell me – just who in his right mind could not abhor?
She’s rotten inside and out – wasted to the core.
Let’s leave her here, a rotting carcass on the floor.

She could just die in agony for all I care!
And, yes, there are times when I have to stop and stare.
Not just at the ticks and lice crawling through her hair,
But at the so-called “person” barely lying there.
She wreaks of day-old sex and even staler booze,
Though it’s not easy to identify the ooze.
From where does she get the money to pay her dues?
Best not to ask – you’d be disgusted by the clues.
Her bodily musk is making me gasp for air.
A nuclear bomb couldn’t make her worse for wear.
If left all alone, I wonder how she would fare.
A fat, greasy hand runs its fingers through her hair.

19 June 2011
Billerica, Massachusetts, USA

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Re: Blown-up sex doll (Score: 1 )
by sedubah on Friday, March 16, 2012 (14:13:16)

eric,

love the rhyming sceme in this piece
this is an excellant piece

the title made me stop and stare

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Re: Blown-up sex doll (Score: 1 )
by ericdn on Friday, March 16, 2012 (19:01:22)

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Re: Blown-up sex doll (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Sunday, March 18, 2012 (05:34:54)

Dunno why you called it funny, it's very dark stuff. Strong and powerful with heaps of momentum, and the inventive way you use rhyme is just excellent.

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Re: Blown-up sex doll (Score: 1 )
by ericdn on Sunday, March 18, 2012 (17:33:31)

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Re: Blown-up sex doll (Score: 1 )
by PoetNaveed on Monday, March 19, 2012 (10:44:26)

Excellent rhyming, flow and meter spot on. Funny but still satying true to poetic form. A superb write

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Re: Blown-up sex doll (Score: 1 )
by ericdn on Monday, March 19, 2012 (11:19:32)

someone

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Re: Blown-up sex doll (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Friday, March 23, 2012 (14:30:32)

holy cow! guess I was surprised by this poem from you. so dark and a bit frightening Smile

. but also very powerful. you certainly captured the scene and made it come vividly alive.

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Re: Blown-up sex doll (Score: 1 )
by ericdn on Friday, March 23, 2012 (15:38:23)

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