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Poems - He's like Hell

He's like Hell

by TheJettSet27

The man I love turns others to stone
from one look into his steel cold stare
And even though it may not show
He's got horns hidden under his skin

My man will claw, swear and curse
without a moment's hesitation
Every night, it's the same old fight
It's all starting to grow old

My lover treats other people like dirt
and it brings them a lot of pain
Truth be told, he's much too bold
He embarrasses me to no end.

My man's like hell, this I have to say,
this I cannot deny.
But in his arms, gazing into his eyes,
(He treats me like a golden prize),
I say it comes as no surprise,
That even though my man's like hell...

I am like the devil.

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Tags: simile, love, weird, man

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Re: He's like Hell (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Monday, May 07, 2012 (21:15:25)

same with this piece...a little more work and the rhymes would be tight and as for the meter you should read some Jacksprat ,easyeverrett, to get the jist...but not bad for a young poet definatly talent in the raw especially like the dark perspectives.....peace

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