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Poems - Someday The Sun Will Just, Burn Out

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Someday The Sun Will Just, Burn Out

by RHDJ

You'll never know how much I've grown
And not just from height of bone
You'll never know the weight behind this smile
Or that I'm far too wreckless when I'm alone

Slide my knuckles againt the grain
Keep pushing and the flesh will fray
I will tell myself there is no pain
But my all is crushed when you walk away

You could have been my fingers
When I wanted to feel
All you are is my sickness
When I'm feeling ill

You are the Darkness
Time won't heal

Pass into Nothing
Death can't feel




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Re: Someday The Sun Will Just, Burn Out (Score: 1 )
by words8me on Saturday, May 05, 2012 (09:19:37)
This poem is just drenched in agony of not wanting to feel. I really like it.

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Re: Someday The Sun Will Just, Burn Out (Score: 1 )
by doris on Sunday, May 06, 2012 (12:56:49)
aww, such a sad piece. I especially loved the beginning stanza. Powerful.

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Re: Someday The Sun Will Just, Burn Out (Score: 1 )
by kylebank on Thursday, August 16, 2012 (17:53:23)
wow, the third stanza is mighty powerful!

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