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Poems - Window View in Umbria

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Window View in Umbria

by Pujakins

Rooftops far as I can see
echo the rise and fall of hills
stretching to the horizon.
Were I a bird I would fly
where my eyes can only gaze.

Like the distant hills rooftops undulate,
weaving a pattern from angles and overhangs.
Seen from my window
this bird's eye view
makes me wish for wings.




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Re: Window View in Umbria (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, May 08, 2012 (08:25:30)
ah! but this poem has wings of its own! love this one!

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    Re: Window View in Umbria (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Saturday, May 12, 2012 (20:09:45)
    Thanks so much for stopping by and for commenting. I loved your comment, too. Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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Re: Window View in Umbria (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Thursday, May 10, 2012 (23:47:58)
G'day Tasha...
I believe its only a poet who sees the finer points of the landscape from a window and then be able to write them into a poem such as yours.
Thank you Tasha
Lindsay

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    Re: Window View in Umbria (Score: 1 )
    by Pujakins on Sunday, May 20, 2012 (22:46:17)
    Many thanks, my friend. I appreciate your comment. It was indeed a lovely sight to see, as is much of Italy. Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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Re: Window View in Umbria (Score: 1 )
by Daniel on Saturday, May 12, 2012 (23:04:08)
Beautiful, vivid
poem, Tasha. I love
how you use your imagery
to describe yourself as a
bird. Very creative. Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

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Re: Window View in Umbria (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Saturday, May 19, 2012 (05:52:47)
A piece that is charming in its gentleness - like the slow movement of thought in a meditative moment.

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