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i didn't believe
i could fall in love
until i gave myself up to you
letting you become
such a part of me
that when you tore yourself away
you didn't leave enough behind
for a mosaic stepping stone

i didn't believe
a broken heart
could cause physical pain
the weight of betrayal
crushing my chest
unable to draw breath
inhaling an asthmatic gasp
exhaling a choking sigh

i didn't believe
anyone could die
from having their heart broken
no will to go on
no hope
no survival instinct kicking in
just this keening
constant prayer
let it end

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Re: HHHMMM (Score: 1)
by sschubert on Tuesday, November 17, 2009 (13:18:46)
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HEy just wanted to let you know I was here checking out your profile - love the set-up - have a GREAT day!

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Re: HHHMMM (Score: 1)
by induce on Monday, June 23, 2008 (23:31:35)
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Reb, Congrats on your first slam win! ~>andye

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by zhaul on Sunday, June 01, 2008 (19:16:41)
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Welcome to GP hope you will enjoy the site, and the adventure of trying to write like the stars.

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