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Biography: ~~TEDDY-BEARS PROMISE~~~ short story: There was a boy and a girl, they fell in love over a long period of time of being friends, he was her teddy-bear. He was the boy of her dreams, and her the girl of his, there love was unbreakable and so strong, that even in the furthest of distances, they felt each others feelings. Nobody had ever come between that until the day came where they could finally be together, and before she had a chance to share a single moment of this love, he turned and walked away. WHY? she would ask herself and others that knew him, WHY is all she could understand to ask. days go by and all tear filled sleepless nights, until it was said that a rumor took everything that mattered away, a simple rumor and a lie, made him walk away without looking back. The girl later is diagnosed with cancer and is terminal, she is dying and without him, feels that it is more of a gift then a punishment, without him, she's already dead. He later comes upon the truth of this lie that swiftly tore them apart, only to find that she is now on her death bed, she has been sitting in the hospital hoping and praying everyday that tonight she will close her eyes and never have to feel anymore pain. As they wheel her outside she sees him standing across the street, she turns away for her heart is so broken, she cant even bare to face him. And every day he would come, in hopes to catch a glimpse of her, and every day at the same time, they would wheel her outside where she sat alone and every day he would watch her cry and turn her face away. He would take one step closer every time, in hopes she wouldn't just once, look away, but her pain was to much for her heart to take, the loss of his love destroyed her. Then came the day, he was so excited, for he was just one step away from standing right next to her. As he arrived his heart raced, his pulse jumped and a smile was visible for miles. He waited and he waited, but she never came back out again. It was later said she passed away in her sleep, no one came and no one knew, there was no one to notify, just a letter.1 Dear stranger, (I will always love you.) next to it scribbled in pencil was written (I kept my promise) is all the letter read, as they carried this old crumpled piece of paper to him, he recognized it, it was the first I love you he wrote to her, and beside his writing, he saw hers. Tears streamed down his face, for he knew at that moment he was loved always and will be forever. The boy knew at this moment that she had in fact kept her promise, she loved him til the day she died.
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There was a boy and a girl, they fell in love over a long period of time of being friends, he was her teddy-bear. He was the boy of her dreams, and her the girl of his, there love was unbreakable and so strong, that even in the furthest of distances, they felt each others feelings. Nobody had ever come between that until the day came where they could finally be together, and before she had a chance to share a single moment of this love, he turned and walked away. WHY? she would ask herself and others that knew him, WHY is all she could understand to ask. days go by and all tear filled sleepless nights, until it was said that a rumor took everything that mattered away, a simple rumor and a lie, made him walk away without looking back. The girl later is diagnosed with cancer and is terminal, she is dying and without him, feels that it is more of a gift then a punishment, without him, she's already dead. He later comes upon the truth of this lie that swiftly tore them apart, only to find that she is now on her death bed, she has been sitting in the hospital hoping and praying everyday that tonight she will close her eyes and never have to feel anymore pain. As they wheel her outside she sees him standing across the street, she turns away for her heart is so broken, she cant even bare to face him. And every day he would come, in hopes to catch a glimpse of her, and every day at the same time, they would wheel her outside where she sat alone and every day he would watch her cry and turn her face away. He would take one step closer every time, in hopes she wouldn't just once, look away, but her pain was to much for her heart to take, the loss of his love destroyed her. Then came the day, he was so excited, for he was just one step away from standing right next to her. As he arrived his heart raced, his pulse jumped and a smile was visible for miles. He waited and he waited, but she never came back out again. It was later said she passed away in her sleep, no one came and no one knew, there was no one to notify, just a letter.1

Dear stranger, (I will always love you.) next to it scribbled in pencil was written (I kept my promise) is all the letter read, as they carried this old crumpled piece of paper to him, he recognized it, it was the first I love you he wrote to her, and beside his writing, he saw hers. Tears streamed down his face, for he knew at that moment he was loved always and will be forever. The boy knew at this moment that she had in fact kept her promise, she loved him til the day she died.
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Submissive In Me

Collar me, cuff me, call me yours, slave I shall be,
tie me, tease me and my love you shall see.
Bend me in pain and show me your law,
I shall live to please you, without any flaw.
I shall be a slave and want nothing more then to obey,
allow me to look, allow me to taste, allow me to scream
but punish me as you may.
I am a submissive and I am true to my desire,
you are my dominant my master, my sir and my sire.
I am your pleasure, I live for your sound,
to your words, your wants and needs, I am bound!
Allow me to be yours and make no mistake,
There isn't one rule I shall be aloud to break!
My boundaries are your kingdom, my body your domain,
your pleasure is my job, submissive is my name!
To run is not an option, to cry only when I'm told,
my heart, my soul and my life you shall hold!
Punishments shall show strength and how far I can go,
this is must to learn boundaries, something I must know!
I am only what you allow, what you desire to see,
but together as one we shall grow, we shall be!

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