Do you care what's coming



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Do you care what's coming

A man looks to the stars and sees the remnants of the moon fighting the sun for best position. They don't take into consideration that they have assigned positions.  As the man stares at the stars their twinkle takes him to his memories of all the fantastic emotions elements and feelings of joy on days gone by that were his. A life so filled with many special things and people that made living so worth while. Gone are those days now and in real life only comes to him in spotty reflection. As the world gets more automated and there are tech tools that make staying in contact more easy and available and however we spend actual time together less and less. This way of life is pulling families and humanity apart that it's becoming more and more sterilized. One day the nessasary human touch like a simple hug may be foreign to new generations. This creates an unhealthy psyche because through physical connection to each other promotes different thought waves and feelings that are so important for a healthy social foundation in one's mind. If we remain on this path a form of evolution may take away a true human form and woman may start giving birth to a robotic being. It's sounds crazy but stranger things have happened. We need to keep God alive in our souls.
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Written on December 27, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on December 27, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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