Xmasday65's comments

I enjoyed how this was written. Easy to follow the thoughts and has a very nice rhythm.

This poem carries the theme very well. It continues to make colorful and creative rhythms until it wraps up nicely in the end. Very nicely done.

Thank you so much!

The rhythm and thought stayed consistent throughout. I could follow the feelings being portrayed. A heartfelt poem. Good writing

Thank you for taking time to look up my hometown and share your thoughts with me. Seldom do people care as much as you. Means a lot.
I’ve watched the determination over the years. The people are wonderful and it truly breaks my heart. I shared this poem with them and it tears at their hearts. They love it as much as me. Cairo will always be my home. more »

Thank you so much!

very nice Thank you

would like any feedback if you have the time