Markl.65734's comments

Here's the list of comments submitted by markl.65734 — There are currently 21 comments total.

	I like your message here. One of the things I really like about your writing is you put your emotion and passion into it and it is received very well by the reader. 1 year ago	View
	Very powerful I've said before with your writing when reading it it reaches out and grabs you when you write you put a lot of mental and emotional energy into your work I like your writing style you know what you want to say and you say it well favorite line you've cut my tongue from me so my lips can't make out your name more » 1 year ago	View
	Thank you very much more then anything I want to use my writing to inspire people abd sooner or later I wa going to compile a poetry book this poem is going to be the very first one in the book 1 year ago	View
	This made me smile keep writing and one day you really may be famous 1 year ago	View
	I really liked this it's original I myself am terrified of spiders I'm arachnophobic so I would definitely freak out if I was in this situation keep writing 1 year ago	View
	I love the full moon I want to write about the moon myself one day I like your line eyes that touch deeply reflecting the moonrise 1 year ago	View
	Interesting you have your own unique form of expression it's good 1 year ago	View
	You deserve a lot of reads on this one 1 year ago	View
	Wow Okay you seriously infused this with enormous emotional energy I can literally feel your thoughts and feelings reach out and grab me as I read this you are very good at conveying you thoughts and feeling though words to me this is the sign of a good writer not just someone who uses the right words and and makes every sentence sound good and be grammatically correct it is about really effecting your reader with what you want to say using yor art as a medium to do that and I feel in this poem you have delivered that very well Of the seven poems I have read of yours this one to me definitely packs the most punch it has an itensity and I really like that also I feel that as a writer you would be very good at creating settings and atmosphere in storiesbut keep writing!!! more » 1 year ago	View
	I have considered for a long time becoming vegetarian this is good encouragement 1 year ago	View
	I truly hope everyone does find that special person very nice 1 year ago	View
	I truly hope that everybody does find that special person very nice 1 year ago	View
	I really like this its refreshing I have not read hardly any poems about the devil like this 1 year ago	View
	I agree with you all the way on what your saying with all do respect to anyones beliefs I feel that even though religions to contain elements of truth I also feel that God(s) are man made creations But I do feel there is a real God out there but people have taken that image and twisted it for their own power and control more » 1 year ago	View
	I hope myself one day to find a person like this good writing let me know when you post again keep writing 1 year ago	View
	Very good I can really feel the emotion in this reach out to me I can relate it can be a very hard thing to do to let go 1 year ago	View
	Good point all that is certain is the past and with the familiar things in the present changing makes us really wander what the future does hold good point 1 year ago	View
	Very well done I really like your writing style and the way in which you convey your thoughts and feelings I hope this one gets a lot more views 1 year ago	View
	Like the metaphor of the mirror I can definitely relate to what your saying about time here it goes so fast I hit 48 not long ago and it seems like just yesterday I was 30 the crazy thing is I've noticed the older I get it seems like the tie seems to goes faster more » 1 year ago	View
	I have always really liked lighthouses and I like your metaphorical use of it here as a beacon of safety 1 year ago	View
	Some of this is a actually true me and my brother some years ago rented out an old large two bedroom aprtment that turned out to be very haunted we both eventually had to move out it got so bad I just added in the part about the female spirit being in love with Sebastian and him being an artist more » 1 year ago	View