Analysis of Brass Spittoons

Langston Hughes 1902 (Joplin) – 1967 (New York City)



Clean the spittoons, boy.
      Detroit,
      Chicago,
      Atlantic City,
      Palm Beach.
Clean the spittoons.
The steam in hotel kitchens,
And the smoke in hotel lobbies,
And the slime in hotel spittoons:
Part of my life.
      Hey, boy!
      A nickel,
      A dime,
      A dollar,
Two dollars a day.
      Hey, boy!
      A nickel,
      A dime,
      A dollar,
      Two dollars
Buy shoes for the baby.
House rent to pay.
Gin on Saturday,
Church on Sunday.
      My God!
Babies and gin and church
And women and Sunday
All mixed with dimes and
Dollars and clean spittoons
And house rent to pay.
      Hey, boy!
A bright bowl of brass is beautiful to the Lord.
Bright polished brass like the cymbals
Of King David’s dancers,
Like the wine cups of Solomon.
      Hey, boy!
A clean spittoon on the altar of the Lord.
A clean bright spittoon all newly polished—
At least I can offer that.
      Com’mere, boy!


Scheme abcdeffffgAHIJkAHIJfdkdklmknfkAoffpAoqra
Poetic Form Tetractys  (48%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1011 01 01 01010 11 101 0100110 00100110 0010011 1111 11 010 01 010 11001 11 010 01 010 110 111010 1111 11100 111 11 100101 01001 11110 10011 01111 11 011111100101 11011010 111010 10111100 11 0111010101 011111010 1111101 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 920
Words 182
Sentences 19
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 40
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 621
Words per stanza (avg) 150
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Langston Hughes

James Mercer Langston Hughes was an American poet, social activist, novelist, playwright, and columnist. He was one of the earliest innovators of the then-new literary art form called jazz poetry. Hughes is best known as a leader of the Harlem Renaissance. He famously wrote about the period that "the negro was in vogue" which was later paraphrased as "when Harlem was in vogue". more…

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