Analysis of I’m Standing Here Before You (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



I’m Standing Here Before You   (Bussokusekika)

Which do you prefer
That which you call pretty lies
Or the honest truth
When did I stop loving you
Do you need a Time Machine
I’m standing here before you

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/1/2023


Scheme X XXXAXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111 11101 1111101 10101 1111101 1110101 1101011 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 249
Words 45
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ifWOSnoCS0M&pp=ygUPVGhlIHdheSB3ZSB3ZXJl I’m getting to old to keep chasing you around…Will you continue to run away from me???Or is it actually you have been telling me all of your pretty lies???I’d still like for you to stop running and reveal yourself to our children…Those who may consider us their parents who see us as their role models…The future dreamers of dreams and aspiring poets to be…The choice is yours…Shall you continue on as Alice or reveal your true identity…Of course I could be vain…And none of our poetry was meant for one another…I can’t promise you the world…I don’t think I should promise you anything…I’m afraid I just might break them if I did…I couldn’t ask you to make any promises to me either…Trust is something I feel we have developed over these many years together…Or am I wrong in beliviving such gibberish???Blah blah…

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Written on December 01, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 01, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on December 01, 2023

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