Analysis of That Would Be True Commitment (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



That Would Be True Commitment   (Bussokusekika)

I sure hope Mary
Is not planning treachery
To lock me away
Remember Vista Del Mar
Was there a plan in motion
That would be true commitment

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/06/2023


Scheme X AAXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 11110 1110100 11101 0101011 1101010 1111010 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 231
Words 41
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Just another silly nonsensical poem about nothing in particular…So much for damnedIF you do and damned IF you don’t…Whatba win win situation…What thinks ye Mary Mary of thee 3???Have a merry merry Christmas…And be of good cheer…For it is that time of the year…

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Written on December 06, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 06, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on December 06, 2023

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