Analysis of The Lady in White.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



The Lady in White.

When I wake up at night, I can see a lady holding a baby. She has a teardrop in her eye. Oh my God, it's my mother and brother; they never survived. She arrives when I'm not looking. I have to wonder what she is doing. They both died a decade ago. What should I do? I don't know. She came to take away my pain and to keep me sane. And keep me in the right lane. All the chains that I carried in my brain. She took them all away. Now I don't have any more shame, and my name is still the same.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01001 111111111010100101101001111111001011001101111101111011110111001011111111111101110111101100111011110011111101111110110111101
Characters 512
Words 112
Sentences 14
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 190
Words per line (avg) 55
Letters per stanza (avg) 190
Words per stanza (avg) 55

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This poem is about my mother and brother who died.

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Written on January 04, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on January 04, 2024

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