Analysis of May My Father’s Will Be Done (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



May My Father’s Will Be Done   (Bussokusekika)

I’m out of this place
I hope we have a safe trip
Blu is pretty bad
They’ve thrown his alignment off
He’s in no shape for the trip
May My Father’s will be done

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   2/6/2024


Scheme X XAXXAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111 11111 1111011 11101 1110101 1011101 1110111 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 257
Words 48
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This one is about nothing in particular…May whatever happen happen…I believe that it really doesn’t may where I go…Thee 3 will always be there to fuck with me…Oh well…✌️⛄️

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Written on February 06, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on February 06, 2024

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