Analysis of Ask Me IF I Feel Lonely (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Ask Me IF I Feel Lonely   (Bussokusekika)

My heart’s not shattered
Sure I’m in a bit of pain
But time heals all wounds
November was turbulent
I’m now in the month of March
Ask me IF I feel lonely

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh


Scheme X XXXXAX A
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 11110 1100111 11111 0101100 1100111 1111110 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 234
Words 47
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

I’d be lying if I said I’m not…lol…But I’ve come to the realization that I am ok with that…I guess it is just part of the price I must pay for being so blind….So womenss I’ve stated I dare not call ya’ll ladies…Please forgive me if I have chosen to remain single for life…You may always look on the bright side…This way it will not happen to us…

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Written on March 25, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on March 25, 2024

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