Analysis of The day I found you.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



The day I found you.

Nicole was mine from the first day I found her. Then Sue came along and loved me strong, I thought me and sue she died too. I need a girl who will stay and not run behind me. I had it up to here, where love is a small word and part-time things and paper rings. I need one girl who will love me  weak or strong, never wrong, will pick up the phone whenever I call, won't play games, and is not insane. Someone that will walk with me in the rain. Who feels the same? I need someone to spark my flame and have no shame. But until then I will be one lonely man.


Scheme X X
Poetic Form
Metre 01111 01111011110111010111111011111101111011011111111111011011101011111111111110111101010111110110111111100111011111111011110111111101
Characters 580
Words 124
Sentences 11
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 219
Words per line (avg) 62
Letters per stanza (avg) 219
Words per stanza (avg) 62

About this poem

This poem is about all the past relationships and they never last.

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Written on April 08, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on April 08, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on April 12, 2024

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