Analysis of C Minor
When these miss you days are the coldest, I draw your picture on my wall.
It simply covers the boring, heart wrenching nothing at all.
Condensation drips from my iced windows within,
Desolation, isolation, deafness drowns me in my sin.
The captivation of no consolidation for this loneliness I feel,
Each morning I awake is a new turning of my wheel,
Of fate and dishonourment that claws down my spine,
The sounds of destitution screams and whines.
My condeming conscience mortified at my desire,
Although I'm cold to test and touch - my soul does burn with fire.
My craving chokes my throat and gut, my limited breathing struggles,
My head is dead through confusion and thought, a weighted filthy puddle.
I'm missing from my family
I'm missing from my sons
I'm lost and leaving - yet gone for months
My sins are done.
I can do nothing.
Scheme | AA BB CCXX DDXX XXXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111101011110111 110100101101011 01011111001 0100101011011 011100101110011 11010110110111 110111111 011100101 11101011010 11111011111110 1101110111001010 11111010010101010 11011100 110111 110101111 1111 11110 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 820 |
Words | 148 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 4, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 39 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 133 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 30 |
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Submitted on May 02, 2011
Modified on May 02, 2023
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