The Beauty of Paradise



You have a charm
I just can’t resist
when you come around me
I feel such sweet bliss
you help me stay calm
and make it all make sense

when I get nervous
and the mood gets tense
you have a way to make me breathe
and not worry myself

you’re my muse
the gentle breeze that keeps me cool
inspiring my emotions
your presence, the medicine,
the perfect cure when loneliness engulfs me
like an avalanche

your love,
our love is that perfect love many persons dream of
but never experience in reality
my love,
our love blended with God’s love
of creation.
Your love is like twisted flowers in the garden of Eden.
You’re my fresh Rose,
the beauty of paradise.

About this poem

To experience the true beauty of paradise you have to experience real love. The love that God shows all His creation.

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Written on June 26, 2022

Submitted by creg_e on June 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 671
Words 140
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 6, 9

Creg Effs

Creg Effs is a Christian young man who was born in Kingston, Jamaica, on November 19, 1977. He currently resides in St. Thomas, Jamaica where he serves as Chaiman of the Board of Flemming’s Basic School, Chairman of the Parish Board of Early Childhood Institutions, a Director of the Community Management Committee of the Paul Bogle Vocational Institute, Corresponding Sponsor of the Power of Faith Basic School and a member of the Lions Club of St. Thomas. He has been a firefighter for the past 19 years and has been in network marketing since 2012, where he has had some success. Creg is also a Motivational Speaker, Workshop Facilitator, and youth mentor. He has received many awards and recognitions for his dedication to service. He enjoys writing poetry, and short stories, which he has been writing since his high school years, and published his debut anthology, "Once, Twice, Three Times a Charm", in February 2020 and later also self-published his second poetry anthology "So Many Things Mean Love" in September 2020. He has also had his poetry published in The Cambridge-Hall Poetry Journal and 2020: The Year in Poetry. His third and most recent book "It Begins In The Mind Empower Your Thoughts" a collection of motivational thoughts was published on May 18, 2021 through his brand Creginspires, which is also the title of his YouTube channel, through which he inspires others with motivational messages. Creg enjoys going to church, reading, writing, singing, public speaking, hiking, travelling, and helping people. He is a member of the Professional Writers Alliance and myAWAI (American Writers & Artists Institute). You can find his poetry pieces on allpoetry.com, mirakee.com. Favorite Quote: "To get what you want, help enough other people get what they want first!" - Zig Ziglar more…

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