jn.selvadurai
  Bronze Member

thank you Steven for your appreciation and the wonderful insights on the poem.

Thank you Steven for your appreciation and the wonderful insights on this poem. Yes truest wisdoms are gathered through journeying process.

Thank you Anne. Welcome to this poetic community.

An emotional message. Graphic imagery of a difficult past.

A poem close to nature. Such positive imagery. Thank you.

Concise message with such simplicity and rhyme. Thank you.

Such beautiful words of feeling and longing. Immaculate crafting of verse. Thank you.

Such powerful words. Thank you for the strong message. The cost of innocent heads in the name of collateral!

thank you for your appreciation of the poem. We mostly seek success at the wrong place. The realisation and understanding comes later.

All the best to this month’s contestants. Enjoy the poetic experience.

A beautifully crafted verses. Wisdom and understanding of life comes with time and maturity. Conveys a positive and contented reflection of life. This was my second choice. From my memory though.. It was the liite sparrow that hunted Jack Robin. more »

Beautiful construction and a heartfelt story line. As a first timer out here, this was the poem that brought out most emotion. Thank you.

The poetic magic woven delicately. One of my favourites this month. Gave the impression of someone tenderly and intently watching the infant. Thank you.

A beautiful construction, with the skilful use of words, rhyme, and imagery. The impending hurricane provides the vivid imagery and sets the tone of the message. It has the eye set on you. So you have no escape. You, who lied and cheated.
“I” is mentioned at the very end. So all this is between you and I. So if you hear a laughter when dawning at sea- that is me!
Emotion is conveyed clearly with minimum words. more »

A very insightful thought, precisely delivered. Thank you.