jn.selvadurai
  Junior Member

Beautiful construction and a heartfelt story line. As a first timer out here, this was the poem that brought out most emotion. Thank you.

The poetic magic woven delicately. One of my favourites this month. Gave the impression of someone tenderly and intently watching the infant. Thank you.

A beautiful construction, with the skilful use of words, rhyme, and imagery. The impending hurricane provides the vivid imagery and sets the tone of the message. It has the eye set on you. So you have no escape. You, who lied and cheated.
“I” is mentioned at the very end. So all this is between you and I. So if you hear a laughter when dawning at sea- that is me!
Emotion is conveyed clearly with minimum words. more »

A very insightful thought, precisely delivered. Thank you.

When will the poems be released for review? Closing time has passed. Will there be an email sent. Thank you.

Outstanding construction. The message of peace and the futility of war conveyed through the dead unknown soldier.

A learning experience.

A beatiful narrative in poetry. Skillfully story telling with houmour.