Analysis of Happy Birthday Mom



To the very one that can't be replaced in my life with another
She's steady on her lane, doing what is best and obeying orders
No long talk yet,you'll know about her

The one I term 'My Hope' through her spoken word,advice and commitment-she's like a pillar in my life
She's the best woman playing her role,my Dad calls her My Wife

She's the woman that knows me best,when I ain't in my lane she get me in
Around her_smile on my face,I glee

She's not your usual underrated woman but top rated in my heart
In her are layed peculiar goods and income that are set to be an outcome

Known to me is this great soul I term her mother
Kinda thinking of physics,she's my absorber,she absorb my pains and replace it with another (smile)
Because of her and for her I can go far just to see her and even though it's walking a thousand mile

The creator created a soul actually in his likeness
A woman I term HOPE jah has set in place

Here and there,smile have engulfed my whole self
Jah grace kept you this thus far to this very day

Greater you I pray
Wishing you great upliftenment in all your dealings

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MUM


Scheme AXA BB XX XC ADD XX XE EX C
Poetic Form
Metre 1010111110111010 11010110111001010 11111010 01111110101001011010011 10110100111011 10101111110111110 0111111 1111000010101110011 00110101011111111 111111111010 10101111011101110101 01100101111111001011100101 0010010011000110 01011111101 101101111 111111111101 10111 1011101110 1011
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,090
Words 220
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by ValidVibes on May 19, 2021

Modified on March 22, 2023

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