Analysis of Sins To Admit Them Are Forgiven



Before an anticipated evening meal is served.
With the host to announce,
A delicious chocolate cake had been made.
And sitting in places,
Around an elegant table.
Are nameplates easily found,
By relatives, neighbors and friends invited.
One question should be asked.
To prevent security guards,
Hired to prevent heated arguments to start.
Over who it had been to spread a lie.
About something they knew not true.
But had the nerve to accept an invitation.
Hoping,
To impress with their deceiving pretensions.

And not meant to offend.
Only to mention to clear the air,
Of feelings that may be negative.
To keep others unaware,
Who lies behind their backs to backstabbing.

'Hello everyone.
You may have noticed the security guards.
They are here to protect,
And keep the atmosphere clear to prevent...
Anyone from invoking to provoke,
Their acquired skills to introduce to us...
Ways to attract to themselves,
Attention and national media coverage.
Now remember,
We all profess to be 'Christians'.
And everlasting love to have for each other.
But someone here,
Has lied to spread rumors on others.
And...
Not to purposely embarrass anyone.
I have a list of those,
Lowdown nasty creatures.
Unless you all prefer,
A willingness to admit and confess...
Your lieing and evil ways.
Now...
Keep in mind,
Sins to admit and confess them are forgiven!'

'What kind of celebration is this?'

'Consider it a passage!'

'A passage?
A passage from what to where?'

'A leaving behind lies.
To realize how bad they are to digest.
With it to pretend,
Any mind is left peacefully at rest.
Let us all pray,
The day has come...
For confessions to welcome.
Since food to reheat is less tasteful!'

'This is not a celebration.
This is a deliberate 'outing!'

'Keep in mind,
This has nothing to do...
With anyone's sexual preference.
Or rumors to have heard them spread.
No matter how intriguing them to be.
We are here to celebrate acceptance.
Hopefully,
Without anyone arrested and sent to jail!
Denial to live kills relationships.'

'Thank you, Reverand!


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Poetic Form
Metre 011010010111 101101 0010101111 010010 01110010 111001 11001001010 110111 10101001 101011010011 1011111101 01101111 11011011010 10 10111010010 011101 101101101 110111100 111001 11011111 0110 11110001001 111101 010101101 101010101 1010110111 1101101 0100100100100 1010 11011110 00101111110 111 111110110 0 1110001010 110111 11010 011101 0100101001 110101 1 101 110100111010 11101011 0101010 010 0101111 010011 1101111101 11101 1011110011 1111 0111 1010110 11111110 1110010 110010010 101 111011 110100100 11011111 1101010111 111110010 100 01100100111 010111010 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,967
Words 350
Sentences 49
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 15, 5, 23, 1, 1, 2, 8, 2, 9, 1
Lines Amount 67
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 158
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted by lpahtillah on June 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:43 min read
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