Analysis of Asset



I had been offended many years ago.
When then I was told,
My efforts to endeavor...
In a field to achieve any success to believe.
Was because of my ethnicity.
And the fact I am black.
Noticeably from head to toe.

Then one day it occurred to me,
The only reason...
My color of skin was brought to my attention,
Had been because of my contributions.
To add and not subtract,
A quality beyond mediocrity.
And being black I should regard an asset.
Since too many use that,
As an excuse to produce a better product.

Yet will claim what they do,
Should be accepted for what it is.
When clearly their minds,
Are limited to B.S.
With this to perceive themselves,
Capable to compete and more qualified...
Than others who have lived,
Their entire lives subjected to ridicule.
For who they are to despise their abilities!

'Could that be the reason why,
Division, conflicts and racism is on the rise?'

'Hmmm...
I had not thought about that.
However...
I know my ability to be innovative.
Fashionably unique.
Musically inclined.
And rhythmically athletic on my feet.
With a knowing God has blessed me,
To recognize the ignorance of others...
Is not my defeat.
Who knows what makes people crazed.
Especially the ones,
Going out of their way to make it known...
Reality to prioritize it,
Is nowhere near their top ten lists!'

'Well...
There is one thing they are making known,
To be shown as if glad and proud of it.'

'Madness is their asset.
And proud to celebrate,
From one year to the next!'

'Why can't you be positive?
About...
Something!'

'I am.
I'm always positively cynical and sarcastic.
With attempts to describe,
Exactly what I observe...
From a black man's point of view.'

'Why can't you just say,
From an American's point of view?'

'And start an argument with everybody?
About loyalty, heritage, ethnic identity...
Loss of consciousness and deluded by TV?
Do you know how long it has taken me,
To look unaware and stupid?
That was the first task I learned to achieve!


Scheme AXBCDXA DEEFXDGHX IXXFXXXXX XX JHBKXXLDXLXFMNX XMN GXX KXX JXXXI XI DDDDXC
Poetic Form
Metre 11101010101 11111 1101010 0011011001101 101110100 001111 10001111 11110111 01010 110111111010 110111010 110101 0100010100 0101110111 111011 110110101010 111111 110101111 11011 110011 1110101 1001010110 110111 10101010110 111110110100 1110101 010010101101 1 1111011 10 111010011100 100001 10001 0100010111 10101111 1100100110 11101 1111101 01001 1011111111 1010101 1111111 1 111111101 1111110111 10111 01110 111101 1111100 01 10 11 1110001000010 101101 0101101 1011111 11111 110100111 0111001100 01100100100100 111000010111 1111111101 1101010 1101111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,908
Words 357
Sentences 48
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 7, 9, 9, 2, 15, 3, 3, 3, 5, 2, 6
Lines Amount 64
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted by lpahtillah on June 20, 2021

Modified on April 26, 2023

1:46 min read
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