Analysis of Nothing Had
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
From nothing leaves nothing.
Noticeably in abundance missed.
And this...
Nothingness,
To declare once had to have...
Has changed from what it was.
Heard to hear say,
Celebrated with merriment and joy.
With fireworks and flags to wave.
And continuing this very day,
Are those to argue.
Over what from them had been taken away.
A greatness to imitate it faked.
Now to wish their pretensions had been,
More influential to convince...
A nothing had has sustained value.
If the fiction of it,
Stays immortalized to worship...
What is symbolized to idolized,
A likeness of this picked heroic image.
In re-enforced concrete, marble.
And stainless steel.
'For what purpose?'
'To create high paying union jobs,
For hired maintenance workers.
And that is what it takes,
To make what is fictioned great!'
'But...
What about reality?
Where is it?'
'In those checks.
The maintenance workers get to cash.
Every two weeks with reliable benefits.'
'Okay!
But what is really valued kept to have?'
'A good paying job.
A place to go to know it theirs.
Whenever they choose to nap or sleep.
Peacefully.
Food to eat and sex to have.
Provided by a willing and happy mate.'
'You miss my point.'
'And neither do we share,
A relationship that prioritizes...
What reality is that meets to satisfy,
The taste to keep my appetite...
Enjoyably digested.
That to miss,
Will not be scratched off the top of my list.
Get it or not...
This is my truth and reality.
Nothing had I've had enough of many times.
To know this with cupboards bare,
Being philosophical...
Pays not a bill.
Nor 'make-it not-eth',
What I crave go away!
Do we,
Kinda...
Understand each other?'
'I...uh...you...
Took this to a whole different level.'
'Aren't all levels connected to one reality?
One undeniable truth no one can avoid?
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110110 100000101 01 100 1011111 111111 1111 1001101 110111 001001101 11110 10111111001 01011011 111101011 1010101 010110110 101011 10100110 1110110 01011101010 01010110 0101 1110 101110101 11010010 011111 111111 1 10110 111 011 010010111 1001110100100 1 1111010111 01101 01111111 010111111 100 1110111 01010100101 1111 010111 001010100 110111110 0111110 010010 111 1111101111 1111 1111010 10111011101 1111101 100100 1101 11111 111101 11 10 01110 1 1110110010 101100101110 10100111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,710 |
Words | 314 |
Sentences | 52 |
Stanzas | 13 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 13, 1, 4, 3, 3, 2, 6, 1, 10, 8, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 64 |
Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 104 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
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