Analysis of Fake promises
A broken soul 0200 (Pretoria)
They promised they’d be there for you
They promised they would stay
They promised you forever
But left anyways
They promised to always love you
They promised to never leave you
They promised to be by your side
But we both know it was all a lie
All the promises they broke
And All the lies they told
All the heartaches, depression and trauma
You delt with alone
Nobody even bothered to even pick up the phone
Or hit you up with a “hello” just to check up on you
You swore that it was you and i till the very end
But now I’m all broken, with a heart you can never mend
| Scheme | AXXX AAXX XXXBBA CC |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 11011111 110111 1101010 1110 1101111 11011011 11011111 111111101 1010011 010111 101010010 11101 110101101101 11111001111111 1111110110101 11111010111101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 561 |
| Words | 114 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 6, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 16 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 112 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
About this poem
Heartbreak
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Written on August 05, 2021
Submitted by xiluvamkhonto3 on August 05, 2021
Modified on April 19, 2023
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