Analysis of Blessed To Receive



Life to live it,
As a blessing to receive.
Is less emphasized in some societies.
Where that priority is more expressed,
In the obtaining of possessions.
And addressing impressions made.

Today?
Values and standards to have,
Are fast fading as a past had.
For the many these days,
Seeking happiness.
And a way to achieve it basically.
Only to choose which is more important.

Whether a blessed life to receive,
Exploring to adventure the best one can.
With a contributing to a needed economy.
Or whether to participate,
Without unneeded impressions to make.
To then decide,
The worth of relationships.
One has established.
Based upon pretensions created.
With a wishing to then decide,
Why anyone would allow themselves...
To be more concerned,
About having to keep a good credit score.
And owing more to their creditors.
Than to God!
That everyone seems,
To pray more for a thankfulness.
If it is God's will to bless them to get out,
Of debt!

'On my knees everyday I pray.'

'I am so glad to hear you confess that.
I do the same thing too.
And more these days,
I feel so blessed and grateful.
To adventure and explore God's creation.
What do you pray for?'

'Me?
I pray more each day,
To end my addiction to greed.
And that God will find a way,
To have my creditors leave me alone!'

'Try 'cold turkey'.
I'm told most addictions end that way.
I tried that for weeks.
And I'm still addicted to nicotine.'

'My creditors are addicted,
On my ability to pay my bills.'

'Try sincere explanations.'

'That's what I am doing.
But God seems not to be listening.'

'Hmmm.
Then try tears.'

'I have.
But my creditors prefer cash!
And 'that' I have yet,
Been blessed to receive.


Scheme XABXCX DEXFXGX AXGXXHXXIHXXJXXXBXK D XXFXXJ GDXDX GDXX IX C LL XX EXKA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1010101 1110010100 1101001101 000101010 00100101 01 1001011 11101011 101011 10100 0011011100 1011111010 10011101 01010100111 10010010100100 1101010 0101001011 111 011010 11010 101010010 1010111 11010101 11101 01101101101 010111100 111 1101 111101 11111111111 11 11110111 1111111011 110111 0111 1111010 10100011010 11111 1 11111 11101011 0111101 1111001101 1110 111010111 11111 011010110 11001010 1101001111 101010 111110 111111100 1 111 11 11100011 01111 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,600
Words 304
Sentences 43
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 19, 1, 6, 5, 4, 2, 1, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 59
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted by lpahtillah on August 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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