Analysis of A BIRD & IT'S FEATHER



The watch of my life is still
As if an empty tin
My mind asks me to kill
All my love and emotions but
Still my heart doesn’t listen
To it…
and want you till eternity….
Without you my life has become like a bird..
Without feathers

Your memories…. Every second
My heart gathers…
My proviso-Oh! Which nobody bothers..
Thereby making essential for both of us
To become, you my feathers and I your Bird…..
Flying together in this blue open sky
& saying everybody Good-bye…


Scheme AXAXXXXBC XCCXBDD
Poetic Form
Metre 0111111 111101 111111 11100101 111110 11 01110100 01111101101 0110 110010010 1110 101011110 11100101111 10111100111 10010011101 1010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 471
Words 86
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 7
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 182
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

Captured some raw emotions

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Submitted by mannpritgujral on August 21, 2021

Modified on April 27, 2023

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