Analysis of Me Wanna Pick Some Fruit



Mama,
These girls
Here in Jamaica
Are very pretty
Them got
Long jett black
Curly hair
Butter brown skin
Ivory white smile
I think
I am
In love with them
Them bodies shaped
Like a glass coke cola bottle
Them walk around here
Basking in the yellow sunshine
Mama, them girls here
Too good for me
To let them go home
Me wanna pick some fruit
On this island of Jamaica


Scheme ABACDEFGHIJKLMNONCPQA
Poetic Form
Metre 10 11 10010 11010 11 111 101 1011 10011 11 11 0111 1101 10111010 11011 1000101 10111 1111 11111 110111 11101010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 345
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 291
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Written on September 08, 2021

Submitted by gregory_g on September 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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