Analysis of Longing for God



As a deer pants for flowing streams,
So does my soul pant for the Lord;
With the yearning as though it seems,
As if I am being ignored.

My soul thirst for the living God,
When shall I go in front of Him;
Worshipping to honor and laud,
Anxiety making me feel grim.

My tears as my food day and night,
Others saying, “Where is your God?”
I just want to walk in His light,
Since I know He is not a fraud.

For these things I do remember,
As I am pouring out my soul;
With the problems I encumber,
I need for the Lord to control.

Why has He gone and cast me down,
Causing turmoil within me;
I need to get rid of this frown,
Showing His face so I can see.

Deep calls unto hearing the roar,
Of the roar of His waterfall;
His breakers and waves as they pour,
For His voice to answer my call.

By day He commands steadfast love,
At night His song is within me;
A prayer to my God up above,
To take my life and let it be.

So why has He forgotten me?
Why do I continue mourning?
Oppression of my enemy,
Keeps tormenting without warning.

With a deadly wound in my bones,
My adversaries are taunting;
Their beating is causing my moans,
Giving nightmares that are haunting.

I still have a hope in the Lord,
I shall praise Him for salvation;
Continuing in one accord,
Being as His new creation.

Copyright © 2021 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme ABAB CDED FCFE GHGH IJIJ KLKL MJMJ JNJN ONON BPBP G
Poetic Form
Metre 10111101 11111101 10101111 11111001 11110101 11110111 10011001 010010111 11111101 10101111 11111011 11111101 11111010 11110111 10101010 11101101 11110111 101011 11111111 10111111 11101001 1011110 11001111 11111011 1110111 11111011 01111101 11110111 11110101 11101010 01011100 1100110 10101011 1100110 11011011 1011110 11101001 11111010 01000101 10111010 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,282
Words 260
Sentences 14
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Why Are You Cast Down, O My Soul? Psalm 42

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Written on October 29, 2021

Submitted by richards.77936 on October 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:18 min read
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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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