Analysis of Basic And Simple

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



Living drama and B.S. free!
What other way,
Could there possibly be...
To enjoy life?
Without apologies or excuses to make,
For saying how one feels.
And meaning what one says.
No reading between these lines.

With a letting it known,
What is given to receive...
Is returned to give back,
That which is basic and simple enough...
To understand and comprehend,
A doing understood needless to explain!

Since...
One full Moon bared to show,
Invites lips to kiss that validates...
A message sent and personally delivered.

The choice offered...
To respond or not,
Does not change...
A displaying bare of one's Moon!


Scheme AXAXXXXX XXXXXX XXXB BXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010011 1101 111001 1011 010100101011 110111 010111 1100111 101011 1110101 101111 1111001001 101001 0100110101 1 111111 01111110 010101000010 0110 10111 111 00101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 614
Words 130
Sentences 18
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 4, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by lpahtillah on November 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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