Analysis of Loneliness



The sound of the soft quiet noise,
like a warming voice.

Deep inside a voice crying,
slowly fading,
like noises when you're running,
footsteps approaching,
feelings are jumping,
emotions come crashing,
sadness coming in without warning;
and you are falling,
Your heart is pounding.
The feeling of anger rising.
Everything inside you heating.

And all of the sudden you are alone.
You hear the gentle ring of the phone,
and the noise made when you drop a stone,
all in your head like ringing from an earphone
The sad tone,
the feeling of being alone.

Like everything was black and white,
the tapping of the pen when you write.

The feeling that no ones around.
like you have drowned;
like everything crashed to the ground.

And you are reminded that you are always alone.


Scheme XX AAAAAAAAAAA BBBBBB CC DDD B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 01101101 10101 1010110 1010 1101110 1010 10110 010110 101000110 01110 11110 01011010 1001110 0110101101 110101101 001111101 1011110111 011 01011001 1101101 010101111 01011101 1111 1101101 011010111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 798
Words 175
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 11, 6, 2, 3, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

This is a personal poem of how I feel most of my days. I'm apologize, if there is grammatical errors. This is a poem about a child that is 11 years old and feels this way.

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Written on December 08, 2021

Submitted by chua.zara10 on December 08, 2021

Modified on April 26, 2023

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