Analysis of ABIKU



Abiku, the born-dead
Round the oil pot
Leaking the grease that bubbles
You neither stay nor leave
But browsing to and fro the earth
Thousands of gold and silver
Will not appease you
Nor sacrifices of a sweet savor
Can make you stay
For the spirits of your
Soul-mates are driven your
Erratic spirit into the ethereal world
Of your kindred.

Abiku, the monster child
Naked you stripped yourself
Under the bamboo trees
With a leaf of plantain
Tied to your waist
In the market of your spirit world.

Your moody countenance drags
In the mud makes your body-stale
And your philosophical scar shows
Your rebirth and the appearance
Of your first stay
Abiku the born-dead
Of the ethereal world.


Scheme Axxxxbxbcddex xxxxxe xxxxcAe
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1011 1001110 110111 11010101 1011010 11011 110010110 1111 101011 111101 0101001001001 1110 10101 101101 100011 101110 1111 001011101 1101001 00111101 01010011 10100010 1111 1011 1001001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 687
Words 126
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 13, 6, 7
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 185
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Written on December 10, 2021

Submitted by ID on December 10, 2021

Modified on April 30, 2023

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Dr. Idowu James ADEKUNLE

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