Analysis of An ode to love




An ode to love

Sameh Mahgoob
(Egyptian poet )
Translated by :
Hassan Hegazy (Egypt)

It looks as if you’re just coming out
from the legend
and it looks also as if I am there
taking care of moles in the gardens of Babylon
Wiping for the sun your brown hair,
flying butterflies between your breasts,
reading to the passersby the shortest
of the verses.
How can your nipples sleep outside the text?
How can edges live without memory?
How can memories betray the pictures?
How can dreams be completed like this
 without night, clouds or rain?
How can stone fall so on a stone?
All is yours, the hills and the pastures that
 have not slept yet, and the moles
when they cry between my lips
on the slope.


Scheme X AXAX XXBXBXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11 01010 0101 01110 111111101 1010 0111011111 101110010110 10101111 10100111 1010100010 1010 1111011101 1110101100 1110001010 111101011 011111 11111101 1110100101 1111001 1110111 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 712
Words 152
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 18
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 182
Words per stanza (avg) 43

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This poem is written by the Egyptian poet : Sameh Mahgoob and translated by : Hassan Hegazy ,Egypt .

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Submitted by Hegazyhhh on December 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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