Analysis of New Years Substance
In the last minute I go out,
it is raining so loud.
My neck hurting now,
such a pain I said ‘wow’.
I’ve never been so low,
indeed I’m close to the fall.
Torture & sweat,
just for my best friend.
Hope her bad days will end.
She is alive.
Why do I cry?
time still exists.
So I leave again,
it’s just how it is.
Now it’s silence,
I’m all alone.
Not a single soul,
everyone is now home.
My body is so hard to carry,
from all those sad years I feel drained.
Yes indeed I am sad very,
I feel frouded.
that are very nice.
Stumbling through this street,
dark long tunel is all I see.
please don’t fall.
I canceled this call.
Everyone’s so tall,
yet I’m so small with no goal.
I’m hearing fireworks,
a New Year?
So many questions,
without a single tear.
one and only savage.
Is that a man standing there?
Someone really average,
is it another loner in the streets?
Someone like me?
he looks startled.
It’s the bad sight,
no one was there.
Why do I care,
oh I know…
that I’m all alone.
Hope I didn’t mourn.
just another fall,
Left side shining market,
right side me high as a dawn.
Lighting like a bright magnet,
this is that market.
But nothing near,
Looks like me so hazy,
Today is too crazy.
Vision is now empty,
I see red so I vent it.
Whistling hiss is coming,
from horror to dancing.
I hear the music playing,
sick and hectic yet too amusing.
Anxiety is a huge piece of my of mind,
let’s celebrate until I’m numb.
I hate my home.
Full of loam,
but I still open the door.
Why do I keep trying to do more?
I’ve been her before.
And I sigh,
they are broken.
The doors that I defy,
I met those eyes.
Eyes that raised me,
Put a happy face this is not me,
at least I tried.
Became an actress for what?
Ask my traumas,
how much I love my little marijauna.
Crawling to the bathroom,
she has no clue.
I’m moving slowly,
After a bath,
I sit quietly.
Yet my mom,
still breaths so loudly.
Where she left all of her love,
wish I can return time.
this little high.
For those drugs…
I would die.
Happy New Year,
try not to cry.
Light a blunt,
and stay fly.
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Metre | 00110111 111011 11101 101111 110111 0111101 101 11111 101111 1101 1111 1101 11101 11111 1110 1101 10101 10111 110111110 11111111 10111110 111 11101 100111 1111111 111 11011 111 1111111 1101 011 11010 010101 101010 1101101 110100 1101010001 111 1110 1011 1111 1111 111 11101 1111 10101 111010 1111101 1010110 11110 1101 111110 011110 101110 1111111 101110 110110 1101010 101011010 010010111111 1100111 1111 111 1111001 111110111 11001 011 1110 011101 1111 1111 101011111 1111 0111011 1110 11111101 10101 1111 11010 1001 11100 111 11110 1111101 111011 1101 111 111 1011 1111 101 011 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 2,458 |
Words | 694 |
Sentences | 62 |
Stanzas | 92 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 92 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 17 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 4 |
About this poem
it’s late in night, 31. 12. 2021. i am walking alone from my friends house. everything feels so surreal, but yet so free and nostalgic. i felt sad, but the more satisfying state of sad. i wasn’t sober.
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