Analysis of Busy Being Busy
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
Is busy being busy,
When that busy beaver...
Chooses to chew through,
Structures built upon...
Solid steel and cement.
Just to undo the appearance.
And not outdated contents.
Repeatedly used,
As evidence of a strength...
Kept within these structures.
Is busy being busy,
When all priorities are focused..
Upon aging images preferred to keep.
Of symbols memorialized,
On exhibit.
And around them a hired custodian,
Is paid an hourly wage...
To dust, mop, wax and sweep.
Into a nostalgic untouched glow.
That satisfies those who visit...
With wishes to want to re-enact a past,
So long gone.
But the fact of that to no one matters!
As long as the show,
Goes on and on to remain dependable.
Sustained and maintained,
In a forever deludedness!
Free of fingerprints from human touches.
Like one's LIVING ROOM.
Where the furniture is covered in plastic.
Shown and known where no human sits.
Is busy being busy more,
Busy than a busy should be.
When these days to live,
With the future within sight...
Everyone seems to crave the appetite,
For more of those yesterdays.
To celebrate as if wanting to escape,
Away from what tomorrow brings.
Anticipating tomorrow repeats...
A doing done to do over again.
Is that what busy means,
To many being busy...
Doing familiar routines?
And...
If anyone should mention or bring,
Something so new yet not found...
Worthy of microscoped scrutiny.
In need of thoughtful busy bodies.
Hungering as if starving,
For fresh and new ways to be busy.
Would those thoughtful be about,
Tomorrow to know the past...
Can not just be plastered over.
Painted.
And...
Surrounded to impress,
With expensive Bermuda grass!
Or...
Will they be enticed and attracted,
To other scenarios?
Promising this and that,
Along with increased wages.
To pay for the skyrocketing rise,
In the cost of living basically!
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (23%) |
Metre | 1101010 111010 10111 10101 101001 11010010 011010 01001 1100101 101110 1101010 110100110 01101000111 1100100 1010 00110100100 111101 111101 010010011 1101110 11011110101 111 1011111110 11101 11011010100 01001 000101 111011010 11101 10100110010 10111101 11010101 10101011 11111 1010011 10111010 111110 1101110101 0111011 01000101 0101111001 111101 1101010 1001001 0 11011011 1011111 1011100 011101010 1001110 110111110 1110101 011101 11111010 10 0 010101 10100101 1 111010010 1100100 100101 0110110 11101001 001110100 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,821 |
Words | 373 |
Sentences | 45 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 10, 21, 10, 24 |
Lines Amount | 65 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 354 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 76 |
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