Analysis of I Never Win



I never win, Win I never
It seems that someone is
always more clever...than I
Kids win when they cry, smile
or sigh
Seniors when they die...and go
to heaven, that is
But me, I am always doing my
thing, second string...never
amount to much of anything
I never win, Win I never
as even my mind is more clever...
than I. It knows my limitations
situations and trepidations
It runs from confrontations in
relations....ships, that is
Win, I never..I never win
but tomorrow, I will begin again.


Scheme AbcdcebcafAagbhbhi
Poetic Form
Metre 11011110 11111 1111 111111 11 101111 11011 11111101 1101 0111110 11011110 110111110 11111010 01001 1110100 111 111101 101110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 488
Words 94
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 372
Words per stanza (avg) 88

About this poem

This poem was written in 2005. It is about making your best efforts but never winning or but motivates one to continue to persevere.

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Written on November 03, 2005

Submitted on February 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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