Analysis of Kaala bhawra



Eak khushali jiwan mai ,
Eak kaala bhawara atta hai.
Saari khushiya lay karr kai woo
Eak ratt andehari daetta hai.
Wo ullajh gayai un ratao mai or
Saari khussiya bhi  tutt gayi.
Wo magan hui un ratao mai
Saari khussiya bhi choot gayai.
Maa ka dill bhi abb toot gaya.
Maa ka ansu bhi choot gay.
Kaali raatay bhi tutt gai.
             Kiya kaehna un batao ko
Unki khushiya to tutti hi merri khushiya bhi choot gay.
#Eak khushalli jiwan mai
Eak kalla bhawara atta hai.


Scheme ABCBDEAEEFFGFAB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111 111101 1011111 11111 1111111 101111 11010111 101111 1111111 111111 11111 11111 11110111111 1111 1101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 479
Words 97
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 356
Words per stanza (avg) 87

About this poem

This poem is about the sadness in life.

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Written on November 28, 2022

Submitted by Niket on January 18, 2022

Modified on April 19, 2023

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