Analysis of Hang Out With Grandpaw



The lord took him

Before we met

All those days and nights

That we never spent

Sometimes I go back

Think how it would have been

Had I gotten

To meet him

I've seen his face

Is in a picture

In a dusty old frame

Never saw him smile

Never saw him laugh

Man, I wish I could have had

Just one day to sit and talk

With the man, I know little about

Man, what I'd give

Just to hang out with Grandpaw

I know his halo

Was an old ball cap

I know his grandkids

Loved to sit on his lap

And watch cartoons

On Sundays before church

I know he worked a farm

For over thirty years

But I wouldn’t know his voice

If I were to hear him say

How are you doing thesе days

Man, it sure is a shame

That the only way

I'vе seen his face

Is in a picture

In a dusty old frame

Never saw him smile

Never saw him laugh

Man, I wish I could have had

Just one day to sit and talk

With the man, I know little about

Man, what I'd give

Just to hang out with Grandpaw

But he’s up there in those clouds right now

Looking down saying

That the only way

He’s seen my face

Is in a picture

In a dusty old frame

He’s never seen me smile

He’s never seen me laugh

Man, I wish I could have had

Just one day to sit and talk

With the boy, I know little about

Man, what I'd give

Just to hang out with my grandson

But I'll just wait

‘til the day he comes home

So, he can hang out with grandpaw


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Poetic Form
Metre 0111 0111 11101 11101 01111 111111 1110 111 1111 10010 001011 10111 10111 1111111 1111101 101111001 1111 111111 11110 11111 1111 111111 0101 11011 111101 110101 111111 1101111 1111011 111101 10101 11111 10010 001011 10111 10111 1111111 1111101 101111001 1111 111111 111101111 10110 10101 1111 10010 001011 110111 110111 1111111 1111101 101111001 1111 1111111 1111 101111 1111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,454
Words 362
Sentences 1
Stanzas 57
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 18
Words per stanza (avg) 5

About this poem

This song is dedicated to my grandpa I never met, my Papa Jimmy. My mother did not let me meet my dad or any of his side of the family until the time I was eleven. By that time my Papa had passed, from cancer. He passed when I was 7, I am 17 now.

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Written on January 18, 2022

Submitted by calebmyers1488 on April 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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